Mind scrambles air
As soft as nothing
Stifling eager joints of fingers
Leaving wasted ink on blank paper
Empty but desperately longs to be filled.
Periods turned into questions
Resounding noises in my head
That turned into blots
That turned into myself—
An insignificant stain.
wow,even if you say you have writer's block,it's still poetic. you're no insignificant stain though.
ReplyDeleteone very curious question mate---
ReplyDeleteyou see---I think this blog of your and all it's content---not just the write-ups but everything in it---and the pictures are perfect for every article---(not to mention the music on the background)
....so , going back to the question, where do you get all those pictures?
they are just perfect....they all add up.
omg. i thought there's a continue to read button.
ReplyDeletebut what you just wrote is beautiful! :)
ReplyDeletewas just browsing through blogs, not keen on leaving comments. but i just had to here. wala akong masabi bro! ang galing mo!
ReplyDelete..but marks forever! Isignifican yet powerful..
ReplyDeletean insignificant stain...
ReplyDeletei love the line dude. =)
ang lalim..pero maganda ang sinisimbolo ng tula mo.
ReplyDeletehmm..balik ako. namnamin ko lang muna ang wordings.
hmmm...frustrated yet you were able to come up with something as good as this... :)
ReplyDeleteflor: ei, thanks for the comment. my frustration turned out be an inspiration..weird noh? hehe!
ReplyDeleteantonio: they're all from flickr...parang photo databank...parang deviant art but it's exclusive for photos...dun ko din kinukuha yung ibang pics for banner..hehe!
thanks :P
red: eto na yata pinakamaikli kong post...i'm on a writer's block i think...waaa!
aris: thanks, aris :P
allan: thanks, allan...welcome to the blogosphere!
chyng: permanent, indeed :)
denis: ei, denis...thanks for dropping by...i thought you are on a blog leave? hmmm...
blog back soon, ayt? :)
eli: salamat, eli :) balik ka anytime... have a blessed holy week!
leslie: yeah! the frustration becomes the inspiration...hehe!
Ron, why???
ReplyDeleteUhm, wanna go to iblog5?
that's natural. no need to be hard on yourself. we cannot always be in the blogosphere every time. :)
ReplyDeletemaybe a video blog or a picture story instead? ;)
never will you be an insignificant stain to a fan like me =)
ReplyDeletehey galing..
ReplyDeletekaya hindi ako pwede na di dumaan sa blog mo..
galing..
Since you had all of us glued to your literary form of writing, whatever insignificant stain seemed completely oblivious for the sheer beauty of its style and content.
ReplyDeletei hate you.
ReplyDeletewriter's block na yan? :P hehehe.
kapag may writer's block kasi ako, di talaga ako nagu-update! hehe. :)
Wow... you call this a product of one who's having a writer's block?
ReplyDeleteGee! This is just amazing! That is even an understatement. I've seen your posts that manifest your writing prowess... it's one of the best.
Be blessed this Lenten season!
may topic ka ba na hindi kayang gawan ng tula?
ReplyDeleteastig ka talaga parekoy.
Hehe. magtatanong yung makulit na bata.
ReplyDeleteano yung writer's block? hihi
the beauty of brevity <3
ReplyDeleteton: nakp, can't go..hehe!
ReplyDeletepao: nako, i'm not being hard on myself. medyo nakakafrustrate lang...hehe!
gravity: thanks! i'm a fan of yours too! :D
ice: salamat, ice :D
jon: thanks for the comment, jon. i really appreciate it :)
karmi: i just have to squeeze that poem out of me, kasi nararamdaman ko it would take awhile before i could post something again..hehe!
desert aquaforce: hays...that is so nice of you to say. and it torments me because i couldn't leave comments on your site..waaaa! thank you so much.
flamindevil: thanks for your comment :D
by the way, how's your lenten season there?
peace out, parekoy!
allen: hindi ko sure eh..pero alam ko kapag walang maisulat??? hahaha! and yet my post ako..hahaha!
tinay: thanks tinay! :P
hey mr.poet.. the best..
ReplyDeleteand you're n a writer's block in that situation huh...
idol!
I Love the line, "soft as nothing", very poetic! :D
ReplyDeleteNice naman...
ReplyDeleteThere's more pa naman e... Hehe :)
Happy Easter!
I am back!
lucas: richard, thanks :P
ReplyDeleterhaingel: thanks, rhaingel :)
rixhard: welcome back :)
Mahirap ang writer's block. Ako rin, long-time sufferer ng ganiyan. What you need are stimuli that would make you want to write again. I hope you get to obtain that, kasi sayang naman pag hindi ka na magsulat.
ReplyDeleteeto na uli ako. hehe
ReplyDeletestain..para sa akin, hindi laging negative ang marka ng stain. sa isang artist, pwde kasing lumikha ng isang obra maestra out of stain na yan!
happy Easter po.
shatts: yeah...sometimes tayo ang kailangang maghanap ng inspiration that wait for it to come to us...
ReplyDeleteeli: belated easter eli!
i agree. to the artist, like yourself, a stain could be a start of masterful artwork. :)
Never mind Mr. Lucas.... It'll spark again.
ReplyDeleteHappy Easter Monday!
Writer's block... ayos naman ang naisulat. Matagal-tagal ka na ring hindi nakapag-post, 6 days na. [Ako matatagalan pa. Sumilip lang.]
ReplyDeleteHappy Easter, Roneiluke! o",)
Know what, i'm not really a fan of poetry. Pero kapag binabasa ko mga tula mo, tumatagal mata ko. Incredible but true.
ReplyDeleteCurious lang ako, ano or sino 'yung "insignificant stain"?
Pwede bang mahiram yung term pan-tawag sa mga ex? Harharhar.
Galeng-galeng mo naman dude. :p
Inspiration comes to us unexpectedly, yung stimulus din, minsan may pagka-random ang effect. It's upto the writer kung saan patutungo yung gawa niya.
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Vaccum ang katapat niyan, para matanggal kaagad ang agiw. hehe.
Yeah, ang dami na naming pets. Yung pusa kasi, madaling magbuntis, ayun, buntis na nga yata ulit. Mahirap talagang mag-alaga, pero mas mahirap ma-attach sa pets.
KJ: and it did...ahehe! Belated Easter, Mr. Kris Jasper :P
ReplyDeleteRJ: pansin ko nga matagal ka na din hindi nakakapadpost...i guess your busy??? hmmm...
anyway, i hope you had a blasting holy week :)
jake: hahaha! oo nga no? hindi ko naisip na pwede pala xang tawag sa mga ex's! ahehehe! then, sure!
thanks for dropping by :D
Shatts: oo nga eh...napakaunexpected nga minsan. minsan sabay-sabay silang magmamaterialize cramming your brain cells. ahehehe!
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hala buntis pa yung isa? nako baka mapuno na bahay niyo ng pusa! hehe! we have a cat pero inampon na namin kahit hindi sa amin. haha! we have a lot dogs (not puppies). we have 3 pairs or love birds, a parrot and a pool full of karpas. hehe!
i promise to clean my room this weekend! hehe! manyana habit working...:P
You are definitely not just an insignificant stain. andami mo kayang fan. isa nako dun. ;p
ReplyDeletemedyo marami pala akong na-miss na post dito.. haha