Step one, two
Spell love
With your kiss
That I miss
And then release
My lips goodbye
Then say hi
To the end
Knees bent
On the ground
Feet bound
To last forever
But never
Forget my scent,
Nor lament
The fading shadow
That is I.
Till death not part
From my heart—
A secret place
To find and chase
Your voice
That sings songs
And prolongs
My breaths,
And breaks the line
Of decaying time.
Swift as air
My pulse beats
In the heat
Of your skin
I inhale
In reverse—
A curse
I will embrace
And trace
Back to this night
And your light
Tearing my mind
Rewind!
Step one, two
Say I love you
Then free me from you—
That I will miss
And I will kiss
Only in dreams
After this fleeting bliss.
24 comments:
This, my friend, is contradicting, and all too tragic.
To profess one's love, only to let it go is one experience that one shouldn't have to go through. But the sad reality is it happens more often than necessary.
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Aha! Self-confessed book borrower! I really need to catalog my collection, but I haven't a clue yet on how to start. hehe
two thumbs up..
musta ron?
Great mix of emotions! Just as a saw reveals the finer grains of the wood, your writings opens a layer each of your wondrous existence.
knilig ako. ewan ko, it evoked a sensual feeling that i felt when I was watching, "in the mood for love."
Ron,
may ibabalita ako sayo. Di ba lately One Tree hill pinapanood ko. Nanganak ang ate ko, and since lalaki ang ine-expect nila sa new born, eh ngaing babae. Walang ready na name, and so we named her HAILEY! :D
THE BEST!! I sooo wish I could write like this. galing mo master.
wow... so beautifully written... good!! kiss in the dream? so romantic~~ lol
We climb and climb and at the top we fly
Let the world go on below us, we are lost in time
And I dont know really what it means
All I know is that you love me, in my dreams
- In my Dreams by Reo Speedwagon
sana magka love life ka na... hehehe!
RON! HOW ARE YOU? MISS YAH! NGAYON LANG ULIT AKO NAPADAAN DITO. HEHEH.
NAKOW, HINAHANAP KITA NITONG MGA NAKARAANG BUWAN SA YM. HEHEHE. NAKUHA KO NUMBER MO DATI DI BA? KAYA LANG DI KO MAKITA SA NOTEBOOK KO. HEHEHE. ;)
same point as shats'. the poym in its sing-song fashion gets to levels that make one think on the push-pull of relationships.
hay.
lagi aong nauubusan ng adjective pambla este adjective ng paghanga pagnagbabsa ako dito hehe
parang maganda tong gawing rap. kung musically inclined lang ako edi sana ginawan ko to ng tono.
step one, two, break it down, yoh! nyahahaha!
you are so good with words :)
I admire that!
Anyways, it's been a while since the the last time I was in the blogsphere...
Hope you are well, Ron!
goosebumps ako habang binabasa ko..
di ko alam..
nadadama ko kasi bawat words..
at ang pagkakahalu-halo nito..
parang ulam..
ang sarap basahin..
galing kuya ron
wow! galing talaga~ EMOTIONS WERE BEING pOURED!
Simple but easily read. At least the meanings werent hidden in various forms of psychobabbles.
Smooth to the eyes and the brain (to those who have it). NICE!
this is very witty! i had to read it over and over again, until it got stuck to my head. well done, as always. something fresh btw. Ü
ah, women.... can't live with them, can't live without...
I can spew a bunch of cliches for you like "if you really love someone then you'll let them go", or "it's better to have loved and lost" blah blah blah...
but I like this one: "there's plenty of fish in the sea"... find yourself another muse brother hehe.... although I like the tortured poetry...
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BTW, the same goes for those of us who almost lost loved ones in 9-11.... the reality is that we all lost something that day.
take care man.
Great poem! Nice choice of words.. musta na?
this is one of the reasons why i missed blogging and reading blogs... glad to be back in your your universe, ron!
its a very different poem i came across.. Good attempt
Keep penning :)
Cheers
binasa ko sya mula sa ending pataas. pwede din pala
hehe
i love the play on irony.
and the music, winner hehe
miss this blog
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kmusta brother?
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